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Publication of new research is an essential step in scientic
progress (Szabo et al. in press). Many books and other
published recommendations provide a large, sometimes
excessive amount of issues and information to be included,
and of mistakes to be avoided in a scientic paper. However,
there is a lack of simple and clear recommendations on how
to write a manuscript. To make life easier for new authors,
we propose a simple hypothesis-based approach, which
consistently follows the study hypothesis, section by section,
throughout the manuscript. For simplicity, we will refer to
one study hypothesis in the following text, despite the fact
that larger studies may intend to test several independent,
connected or hierarchical hypotheses.
Scientic papers are usually structured in four sections, that
is, introduction, material and methods, results and discussion.
Other common parts of manuscripts are abstracts, the
reference list and acknowledgements. Declarations of ethical
approval by a registered committee, of informed consent
and of interests of the authors are needed when investigating
patient and control subjects.
Even though the headings and order may vary, the general
approach is usually the same for most psychiatric and other
medical journals. In simple terms, the introduction explains
the scientic relevance and the contents of the study hypothesis.
e methods section tells us how to test the hypothesis. e
results section should provide the answer to testing the study
hypothesis. e discussion should name and evaluate the
outcome of testing of the study hypothesis in more general
terms including its limitations and the potential implications
on clinical practice or future research.
e following paragraphs will provide essential details on the
roles and possible contents of the dierent sections using a
hypothesis-based approach.
Reinhard Heun1*
How to write a scientific paper: A hypothesis-based approach
Abstract
Many books and other published recommendations provide a large, sometimes excessive amount of information to be included, and
of mistakes to be avoided in research papers for academic journals. However, there is a lack of simple and clear recommendations
on how to write such scientic articles. To make life easier for new authors, we propose a simple hypothesis-based approach, which
consistently follows the study hypothesis, section by section throughout the manuscript: e introduction section should develop
the study hypothesis, by introducing and explaining the relevant concepts, connecting these concepts and by stating the study
hypotheses to be tested at the end. e material and methods section must describe the sample or material, the tools, instruments,
procedures and analyses used to test the study hypothesis. e results section must describe the study sample, the data collected
and the data analyses that lead to the conrmation or rejection of the hypothesis. e discussion must state if the study hypothesis
has been conrmed or rejected, if the study result is comparable to, and compatible with other research. It should evaluate the
reliability and validity of the study outcome, clarify the limitations of the study and explore the relevance of the supported or
rejected hypothesis for clinical practice and future research. If needed, an abstract at the beginning of the manuscript, usually
structured in objectives, material and methods, results and conclusions, should provide summaries in two to three sentences for
each section. Acknowledgements, declarations of ethical approval, of informed consent by study subjects, of interests by authors and
a reference list will be needed in most scientic journals.
1University of Bonn, Germany
*email: globalpsychiatry@gmx.com
DOI: 10.2478/gp-2018-0004
Received: 14 December 2017; Accepted: 20 December 2017
Keywords
Psychiatry, neuroscience, publication, manuscript, hypothesis
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THE CONTENT OF THE ABSTRACT
e abstract is usually put at the beginning of a paper. It
should give two to three sentence summaries of each section
of the manuscript, usually structured in objectives, material
and methods, results and conclusions. e objectives
introduce the concepts relevant for the study, develop and
nally name the study hypothesis. e methods indicate the
tools and the ways the hypothesis was tested. Results describe
the data collection and analysis that lead to a conrmation
or rejection of the hypothesis. Conclusions must indicate
the conrmation or refusal of the hypothesis, validate the
outcome, may explore the practical or theoretical relevance of
the ndings and may provide specic recommendations for
necessary future research.
e importance of the abstract must not be underestimated as
most researchers will decide if they are going to acquire and
read the full paper based on the contents of the abstract.
ROLE OF THE INTRODUCTION
e introduction of the manuscript must develop and lead
towards the study hypothesis, paragraph by paragraph. An
initial paragraph may introduce the diseases or concepts to
be investigated. If there are several diseases or concepts to be
addressed, these could be explained in dierent paragraphs.
Parts of such paragraphs or, if need be, individual paragraphs
should introduce the general and specic relevance of the
diseases or concepts to be investigated. Depending on the
hypothesis to be developed, such relevance could be genetic,
biological, clinical, therapeutic, societal, epidemiologic,
nancial, and so on.
If there are dierent concepts or issues to be investigated by the
study, a later paragraph must explain the connections between
the dierent aspects of the study questions. Assuming that
most study hypotheses focus on the relevance of the possible
interactions of dierent concepts, for example, diseases,
prevalence, therapeutic approaches, and so on, there is a need
to review and present the relevant literature covering and
connecting these issues. is review of the relevant literature
must summarize what is known about the relevant issues
addressed by the study hypothesis, and what is unknown or
unclear about these issues.
e nal paragraph of the introduction should develop the
hypothesis by indicating the missing information in the
scientic literature, and what can be added to the scientic
knowledge by testing the study hypothesis. In other words,
what piece of the scientic puzzle can we get by testing the
study hypothesis. is last paragraph of the introduction
should nally explain and name the precise hypothesis in a
way that allows the systematic testing of the study hypothesis.
A precise description of the study hypothesis will introduce
the following section on materials and methods, and will
facilitate its understanding.
ROLE OF MATERIAL AND METHODS
e material and methods section may start by repeating the
study hypothesis in more formal and technical terms, relating
this to the dierent methods and conditions to be used for
testing it. It may be useful to name the null/alternative
hypothesis that is statistically tested.
It should be mentioned where and when the study was
performed, and why these conditions have been chosen.
Next, the sample selection, the inclusion and exclusion criteria
and the rationale for the choice of these must be described in a
way that other researchers can understand these and would be
able to reproduce these.
e choice of diagnostic instruments and interventions, and
the rationale for these choices must be explained with the
same precision. It will be important to dene by whom, how
and why the instruments and interventions were applied.
e outcome of the intervention or assessment must be
dened and must lead to the explanation of how the outcome
data have been collected, compiled, assessed and analysed to
test the study hypothesis.
e statistical section or paragraph must clarify how the raw
data were analysed to conrm or reject the hypothesis.
PROPOSED CONTENTS OF THE RESULTS SECTION
e results should start to give a precise description of the
sample or material as it nally has been selected. Depending on
the nature of the study hypothesis, the amount and necessary
precision of demographic or material description may vary.
Further paragraphs should describe the results of interventions
and assessments step by step following the course of the
procedures outlined in the methods.
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THE RELEVANCE OF ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
Acknowledgements should be added when other persons
have substantially contributed or helped with dierent aspects
of the paper such as providing material or helping with
the literature search but do not qualify for full authorship.
Authorship would indicate that authors have contributed in
all aspects and stages of the study, and can claim scientic
responsibility and can support its scientic validity.
ROLE OF THE REFERENCES
e reference list should be compiled in line with the authors’
instructions of the journal for which the publication is
intended. Literature that is relevant, necessary and sucient to
understand the development, testing, outcome and discussion
of the study hypothesis must be cited, as long as it is not a part
of the general scientic knowledge and/or not a part of the
authors’ personal knowledge or conclusions.
LIMITATIONS OF THIS HYPOTHESISBASED PROPOSAL
is proposal for a hypothesis-based writing of a scientic
manuscript is formulated as a result of the experience of the
author as reader, author, reviewer and editor of psychiatric
and neurological papers. ese recommendations are meant
to help new researchers who are struggling with their rst
papers. ey cannot and do not intend to be exhaustive.
Covering all necessities, possibilities, complexities and
potential mistakes of scientic articles would defeat the initial
purpose of providing some simple and manageable guidance
in a highly complicated scientic framework.
ere are much more extensive recommendations and
checklists to be found for dierent types of papers including
the recommendations for systematic reviews such as
PRISMA (Liberati et al 2009) and AMSTAR (Kung et al
2010) or for guidance papers (Heun and Gaebel 2015).
Such recommendations may be helpful to check the format
and completeness of the relevant information for specic
types of papers. However, we are condent that using a
hypothesis-based approach in all parts of a manuscript may
be a reasonable and helpful aide-memoire and guidance for
writing a scientic paper. Using the current hypothesis-based
approach is unlikely to reduce the chances of acceptance and
publication of a research article in a medical journal.
e main results should be focussing on the evaluation of the
study hypothesis and must provide a clear answer if the study
hypothesis has been conrmed or rejected.
In case there are important and relevant results that have
not been part of the initial intention of testing the study
hypothesis, such results may be explained and summarised
under the headings of results of explorative data analyses.
Tables and gures should be used within the results section if
they can provide additional information or when study results
can be presented more clearly or more economically than in
text format. Table and gures should add to but not repeat the
text, and vice versa.
THE DISCUSSION SECTION
e discussion section should initially state the conrmation
or rejection of the hypothesis in more general and less
technical terms than in the results section.
Following paragraphs should assess if the outcome of the
study is in agreement and can be validated by similar studies
and by supporting evidence from comparable studies within
the research context of the hypothesis. Does the outcome of
the study match or contradict other comparable publications,
and if so, then why?
Another paragraph may explain if the outcome of the
conrmation or refusal of the study hypothesis ts into the
context of the relevant research covering the study question
or if there are any contradictions, and if so, what the possible
reasons for such inconsistencies may be.
Another essential paragraph may focus on the limitations
of the study, the data collection, the data analyses, and on
the limitations of the conclusion that can be made from the
acceptance or rejection of the study hypothesis. In other
words, how far can the results be generalised.
A conclusions paragraph may focus on what the outcome of
the hypothesis testing means in particular and in general. How
can this conrmation or rejection of the study hypothesis be
used for clinical practice or future research, that is, for the
testing of the next hypotheses?
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